Quoted from an email originally sent to: Panpear
The author writes:
Okay, so maybe some of them aren't so talented after all. I sent this one back with a carefully constructed four-and-a-half page critique on how they could improve their art and writing for comic format. Please see the full link here.
[Ed. Note] I was contacted by the guest artist, who requested I take down the critique. I complied, since they are a fan. In addition, they defended their piece magnificently, so many of the points I made are now moot.