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Seeing Double

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Strip by: Manny

Ben: It was really nice seeing you, Luanns.
The two Luanns: You too, Ben. We enjoy our time together.
SFX: *honk*
Ben: I think we should do it more often.
Luanns: We'd like that.
SFX: *honk honk*
Ben: But without Bernice.
Luanns: The honking does sorta ruin the mood.
SFX: *honk honk honk honk*

The author writes:

Yep, I've taken cues from another Square Root of Minus Garfield strip, this time the second-ever SROMG strip, in an effort to fix my personal faults with that strip. For one, although the transcript in that strip makes it clear that both Garfields are voicing their thoughts, only one of them has a thought bubble saying them. I've improved on that with having both Luann DeGroots talking to Ben at the same time.

...It's better than it sounds?

Original strip: Luann, 2008-1-19