Fumble 7: Fourth Wall

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Fourth Wall


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"Four Walls" - Colin Foster

Guy 1: "Dude! Check it out! I'm hanging from the rafters!" Guy 2: "I'm free of my prison!" (note: several letters could be blocked by the panel borders) Giraffe: "Hey, we're trying to sleep here! Keep it down!" Asok: "I don't get this comic zooo..." Cop: "Freeze! Meta-police!" Cop: "You are under arrest for breaking all four walls!" Penguin: "Quack."

"N/A" - Groboclown

Guy 1: Expression! Guy 2: Expression! Giraffe: Expression! Asok: Expression! Cop: Expression! Cop: Expression? Penguin: No.

"Fish out of water?" - Panpear

Guy 1: Marco! Rabbit: *snicker* Guy 2: Polo! Giraffe: Marco! Asok: Polo! Cop: Hey! Close your eyes! Cop: And only one person should be it! Penguin: Marco!

"Twister" - Panpear

Guy 1: Ok. Ok. Right hand... on X. Guy 2: On X? But I can't reach! Giraffe: No fair- I don't have any hands! Asok: Yeah- Mine are off panel! Cop: Well if you can't reach it... Cop: You lose! Penguin: X not color.

"Knitting" - Panpear

Guy 1: In through the front door- Guy 2: - and once around the back! Giraffe: Down through the middle- Asok: And- Cop: -Out- Cop: -Pops- Penguin: Jack!

Dialogue Comments

"Fish out of water?" - Panpear

In case it's not familiar... Marco Polo. I actually used to play this more on the school playground structures. You would call 'Fish in the water?' to catch people who had hopped off the structure to run to a safer spot, so I almost called the title that. -Panpear

"Knitting" - Panpear

I learned that rhyme in elementary school during an after-school knitting program. That's for the basic stitch. There's a different rhyme for the perl stitch, I think, but I've forgotten. -Panpear

"Twister" - Panpear

I enjoyed this one. A good take on the confusing comic. -Groboclown

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