Fumble 6: Tongue
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"I like sleeping too" - Panpear
1: This is... Bob. 2: Bob likes cooking food. 3: Bob likes computers. 4, narr.: Bob likes talking to himself. 4, Bob: Do not! 5: Bob likes sleeping. 6: But now Bob is -feeling blue-. < The words 'feeling blue' are in blue text color>
"Noir - or - Dark and Stormy" - Panpear
1: It was raining when she walked into the joint. 2: Her hair looked much like cooking noodles; fat, long, and wet. 3: "I'm here for the virus," she said vivaciously. 4, narr.: I tried playing dumb. 4, Bob: Cyrus? But Miley doesn't live here! 5: Next thing I remember is being hit on the head. 6: When I woke up, she was gone. And so was my computer.
"Captain's Log" - Panpear
< Font should look computerish > 1: Stardate 35847.5: I've been abandoned. There is little hope for rescue. 2: Stardate 35810.9: This is the last of the food. I hope it will last me through the month. 3: Stardate 35811.1: I had late night munchies. All the food is gone. 4, narr.: Stardate 35928.4: I've been unable to locate food. This planet is- 4, added sfx in background: Thump! 4, Bob: Who's there!? 5: Star...date... 36019.6: ... Pain... awake with... where...? They... ARGH! 6: < strangle alien looking symbol language >
"Something blue" - Amoebae
1: Day 42 of the siege: I am hungry. 2: I've used up all my rations of noodles. 3: Even my secret stash of salami is empty. 4, narr.: I can't let my guard down. 4, Bob: They're using chloroforme! 5: Zzzzzzzzz... 6: The next morning: They did it again! Curse you, smurfs!
Dialogue Comments
"I Like Sleeping Too" - Panpear
I love how my name has somehow become Bob (yeah, those pictures are of me). -Brichs My favourite is "Captain's Log", though :-D
- Bob suites you, I'm sure. I like 'Something Blue', actually. And I'm pretty sure the Noir one would be better if I had come up with a better rhyme with 'virus'. The basic set up is pure comic gold, I'm sure! Haha. -Panpear
- How about "papyrus?" -Colin Foster
- "Papyrus? Oh, you need the place next door." "Papyrus?! What century are you from?" "Papyrus? I'm sorry, we upgraded to parchment." (Deary me, I don't think any of those make it funnier) -Panpear
- How about "papyrus?" -Colin Foster
