Fumble 11: Brick Wall in the Road

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Awkward Fumbles Submissionsedit
Fumble 14 is the last strip submitted as of 00:09, 4 February 2010 (UTC)
Strips Needing Dialogue: Fumble 2: Mayday Fumble 6: Tongue Fumble 7: Fourth Wall Fumble 8: Teddies Fumble 11: Brick Wall in the Road Fumble 12: Rabbit Fumble 13: Bird And Cat Fumble 14: Peas And Pod Fumble 15: Andalusian Dog Fumble 16: Noiseville Fumble 17: Light Trail Strips Recently Published: Fumble 1: Balloons Fumble 3: Robot Fumble 4: Strange Story Fumble 5: Teddy Fumble 9: B/W Fumble 10:Noir

Contents 1 Artist's Note 2 Dialogue Submissions 2.1 "Guess Who's Driving" - Panpear 2.2 "Acme Wall" - Brichs 3 Dialogue Comments

Artist's Note

I was going for a New Yorker Caption Contest-style oddness.

Dialogue Submissions

"Guess Who's Driving" - Panpear

Side Bubble: I told you to stop for directions! Top Bubble: This wasn't on the map...

"Acme Wall" - Brichs

Side Bubble: I told you this sudden appearance of a tunnel looked fishy! Top Bubble: Yeah? Well, how was I supposed to know Wile. E. Coyote had been here?

Dialogue Comments

• As a side note, does anyone have an opinion on which speech balloon would most likely be read first? I can't make up my mind on the matter. -Panpear
  • Hmm. Perhaps I could go back and slide the side-bubble up a little, to make it easier. There's another thing I'd want to fix here, so it wouldn't be a big hassle. -Colin Foster
    • Well if you want to, you can. -Panpear