Fumble 10:Noir
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Artist's Notes
Dialogue-free detective noir comic based on panels 7-12 of "Wally Woods 22 panels that always work": http://joeljohnson.com/archives/2006/08/wally_woods_22.html
Dialogue Submissions
"Smoke" - Colin Foster
2: Shouldn't smoke. 2: Why? 3: They think it's bad for you. 4: And also, they've tried to outlaw it. 4: Killing for insurance money is one thing... 4: But smoking in public can get you thrown in jail. 5: I hate to do it... 5: But I'm taking you down. 6: Have fun, kid. 6: But... the crocodiles!
"Eat Fresh" - Panpear
2: Five. 2: Five? 3: Five Dollar. 4: Five Dollar? 4: Five Dollar Footlong! 4: Come on, do the motions with me! 5: Uhh... I'm sorry but... 5: What are you talking about? 6: SHUN! 6: Ok, ok I'm going.
"Smoking" Taneb
2: What are you doing? 2: Just having a cigarette. 3: You shouldn't, it's very bad for you. 4: You start out with just one, 4: And you keep on going on, and on, and on, 4: And on, and on, and on, until all your income is spent on that filthy habit. 5: That's when you resort to crime. 5: The dark spiral of crime... 6: Have a nice day! 6: ...That was unexpected...
"Boom-leech" - Guido Wolff
2: Excuse me, could you tell me what this thing growing from my finger is? 2: No. Maybe you should ask that bald guy. 3: Ah. You seem to have contracted a case of Malaysian boom-leech. Don't worry, it won't continue sucking your blood much longer. 4: That's not particularly comforting. Also, what now? 4: Now it's going to explode, covering everything in blood. 4: Except for me and the smoking guy, because our trench coats are too awesome to get stained. 5: Wow, what a mess. Good thing the walls were blood-colored to begin with. 5: Yes. I'm going to go now. Bye. 6: Hey Dave, I found your boom-leech. But it's dead. 6: Dammit! How am I going to get the walls here blood colored now?
Dialogue Comments
"Eat Fresh" -Panpear
This is based off of a marketing campaign for Subway. Is it just happening in the states or is everyone getting those ads? -Panpear
- It was totally unfamiliar to me, despite us having Subways here. -Dmmaus
- Interesting. Maybe they don't want to sell footlongs for less profit everywhere. Anyway, here's a youtube commercial of one of the later ones. They have many variations. Five Dollar Footlong (though the video has a lot of user made ads in it... but I didn't want to search too long).
